Writing 201 day 10- better late…

Pleasure Seeking:

Pleasure you delude me

As I search high and low

Never drawing near you

Watching as you go

Why do you so despise me

Leaving me alone

Laughing when I reach for you

Cold like sharp grey stone

Forever I grasp and fight with thee

While pleasure you take flight from me…

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One thought on “Writing 201 day 10- better late…

  1. This is really quite beautiful. I love the simple rhyme pattern as it lends a lovely flow to your poem – it has undertones of sadness, yet it is still beautiful in rhyme and form xx

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